what do you think of this short paragraph? The chandelier added elegance
The pianist starts his fingers
So does the wealthy’s feet
Who only splurges on things they don’t need
People said you wouldn’t know how much you’re worth
Until someone shows you and you believe it
Is it time to trust? Is it time to break out of your shield?
Are you brave enough to embrace another thrill?
My soul goes to the highest bidder.
One that appreciates me in one way or another.
The wealthy, it’s time to show their money.
To me, to me, to me.
I’m something they do not need,
Yet they compete, how foolish.
It’s a joy to watch them fight for me,
It’s a pain to know they do not love me.
i wrote this in 15 minutes.
help me think of a title for this?
March 9th, 2010 at 5:20 pm
what do you think of this short paragraph?
The chandelier added elegance
The pianist starts his fingers
So does the wealthy’s feet
Who only splurges on things they don’t need
People said you wouldn’t know how much you’re worth
Until someone shows you and you believe it
Is it time to trust? Is it time to break out of your shield?
Are you brave enough to embrace another thrill?
My soul goes to the highest bidder.
One that appreciates me in one way or another.
The wealthy, it’s time to show their money.
To me, to me, to me.
I’m something they do not need,
Yet they compete, how foolish.
It’s a joy to watch them fight for me,
It’s a pain to know they do not love me.
i wrote this in 15 minutes.
help me think of a title for this?
March 9th, 2010 at 10:22 pm
How about ‘Rubbish’. That is just a bunch of words and jumbled thoughts. Sorry.
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March 9th, 2010 at 10:24 pm
you should title it "Me".
but then again if you don’t like it ,what is the meaning of the poem?why did you write it?those questions can help you title it.
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